In-Class Post for Dr. Chandler

As I read through the comments my fellow classmates wrote for me, I agree with everyone and I feel that this session totally helped! Each of them gave a different concept/main idea that I can use in my writing and I guess my job is to mesh all of their thoughts into one "thing" the entire piece is going to be about. I already know what I want to write about and I can visualize the scenes I will be including in my essay, but my question to you is: what are you looking for in my essay that I should include? Like I said, I totally agree with everyone's comments and I will take them into consideration as I write my second essay.