Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Reflection Prompts...Last Blog...YEY!!

1. What are your plans as a writer (how do you expect to use writing in your future)?
I would like to become a writer of children's literature some day and I believe that this course helped me reflect on my past, especially when it came to doing our daily journals during the beginning of class. The writing prompts/questions allowed me to gather and create very useful lists that I can go back to in the future! Hopefully I can write a story about my experience living in Hawaii and the hurricane...the two subjects that I've talked extensively on during class discussions.

As an aspiring teacher, I would like to take what I've learned in this class to motivate my future students. I would like to use the same techniques used by the professor in getting my students to think and reflect on their own lives to create moving stories about the one thing that they're experts of...themselves!

2. Describe any changes in your writing style
I had a terrible experience in one of my previous writing courses a few semesters ago and that pretty much crushed my dreams of being a writer. This class allowed me to rethink my dream by writing about things that were of importance to me...myself! (hehe) In my previous classes, I always focused on creating stories for children. Since the assignments in this class made us think about our lives, I began to reflect on the experiences I had in the past. Just like what I said earlier, the lists helped me generate ideas for the essays.

3. Describe any changes in your writing process
This class taught me how to brainstorm and create lists to write about experiences that are important to me. I learned that I really have to think first before writing anything down. I reflected on my experiences first and really had to give some thought into it because our essays required that we find a focus in our paper. This class taught me how to brainstorm and create lists to write about an experience that is important to me.

4. Describe any changes in your attitude toward/interest in/understanding of writing in general, and CNF in particular.
When we made lists for our daily journals and had to reflect on our writing, I became interested in my own life. It made me realize that I actually have some good stories and experiences that I can share with the world! Just like what Meagan and Shannon said earlier, you motivated us to write! You motivated us to be interested in writing, and for this, I am forever grateful!!

5. What have you learned about yourself as a writer?
That I'm not so bad after all. Writing is a process and it takes some time. If you write more, you learn more, and this exactly what we did! Even though it took some time to reflect on my life to make my story better and actually have a focus to my writing, all that time spent sitting in front of the computer or stairing into space really helped me!

6. What features of your writing do you feel are most important for you to work on?
I noticed that my papers don't have a lot of dialogue because I'm not good when it comes to remembering things verbatim. I remember the experience and can write about that, but the dialogue is missing. I've noticed in the previous readings we've had that the addition of dialogue is what brings the paper to life and grabs the reader's attention and encourages them to read more. If I'm going to be an author of children's literature, I need to include dialogue so that kids will want to read the book.

Even though we were given some time to reflect on our writing, I feel that we didn't have enough time to really work on our essays...well for me personally. I was bogged down with a lot of assignments from my other course that I kind of let things slide with regards to this course. But yea...time flies when you're having fun! If only I had more time to reflect and work on my personal essays -- maybe it would have been different.

Monday, December 1, 2008

Essay Publication Venue


I would like to send my first essay, "What I Gained Through the Pain", to Tiny Lights: A Journal of Personal Narratives because this venue accepts essays that are similar to the one that I have created. My essay is about my experience of a failed relationship and how taking kickboxing lessons helped to rebuild my self-esteem and eventually, helped me get over the pain. The main focus of my essay was that pain makes us grow. Though the growing process took some time, the mistakes that I've made and the pain that I had to endure all the more helped me realize that I needed to put myself first! This essay captures my growth as an individual and how kickboxing was an instrument that allowed me to find me and become the person that stands before you today!

Publication:
Tiny Lights: A Journal of Personal Narratives

Subject Matter:
Accepts a variety of topics just as long as it is a personal narrative ("I") or a memoir.

Voice:
My essay fits into this venue because it is a personal narrative. It is reflective, intimate, and was written as if I was telling a story. There are some parts in my essay where I think I added some humor into it though the subject matter at hand (a failed relationship) was more serious. Essays turned in for the contest must feature a distinctive voice.

Depth of Discussion, Form and Artistry:
Tiny Lights is looking for narrative personal essays. Essays turned in for the contest must show a conflict with an eventual shift in the narrator's perspective.

Length:
No more than 2,000 words

Politics:
My essay is clearly a feminist piece, really striving to show GIRL POWER! Tiny Lights requires that all writers communicate the truth of their experiences to the best of their abilities. While no restrictions apply to the essay contest, Tiny Lights will not consider essays with brutality or violence. They do not accept material written for children.

Submissions:
At present, Tiny Lights will only accept essays that are submitted for the 15th Annual Essay Contest which is due on February 14, 2009. They will only consider unpublished work or previously published material for which the author holds rights. For essays like this, rights will be given back to the author after it is published in Tiny Lights.
  • Each essay must be accompanied by an entry fee of $15 for the first essay and $10 each addition essay.
  • Make check payable to Tiny Lights Publications / Mail to: P.O. Box 928, Petaluma, CA 94953
  • Essays must be mailed in a self-addressed, stamped envelope so that they can send feedback or contest notifications back to you.
  • Entries should be typed and double-spaced. Title page of the manuscript should include the author's name, complete address, e-mail, phone number, and essay word count.
  • Prizes will be awarded as follows:
    • First Place: $350
    • Second Place: $250
    • Third Place: $150
    • Two Honorable Mention Prizes: $100 each.
  • Winners will be posted at http://www.tiny-lights.com/ by April 11, 2009.
  • Winning essays may be edited before publication. Final copy must be approved by writer. No essays published without author's permission.
  • All contestants will receive a hard copy of Tiny Lights' contest publication featuring the winning entries.

Monday, November 17, 2008

Blog #18 - Comments about Essay #4

Thanks to everyone that provided comments/feedback concerning my ideas for essay #4. As of right now, I think I'm going to go with food. I love food and it's what brings us all together. Just like what was mentioned in class, it's the one thing that everyone has in common - the love of food.

I don't know how I'm going to organize my essay just yet but I like the idea of making references to a menu (appetizers, main course, dessert, drinks, etc.) I can write about an appetizer and a moment when I met with old friends wherein we ate that particular appetizer (ex: calamari when meeting with Chicago friends in Chinatown).

If that idea doesn't work, I can also talk about food but in the sense of relating it to my family and how it's the one time of day where we all gather together and talk about our day.

Another idea about food that I can write about is some of my favorite Filipino foods and events wherein these foods were eaten during gatherings with family or friends.

I noticed that no one commented on my idea of writing about my journal! I think that would also be a good idea to write about because it's like an external image of who I am. In my journal, I keep quotes that are important to me, that have given me inspiration over time. I don't know...just a thought.

My heart's still not set on any one topic for essay #4. I still need to think this through a little more.

Ideas for Essay #4

Here's a list of various ideas I could work with for essay #4.

- My 4th grade teacher, Mrs. Wagner-Hall. She is the teacher that inspired me to become a teacher myself. I can write about what she did to influence my decision to pursue teaching as a career; key moment that impacted me

- Food and how it always brings people together for various occasions or just because; can talk about various moments when I met with friends again and eating out
* meeting Chicago friends at a restaurant in Chinatown
* meeting with Houston friends and eating at Bubba Gump in Times Square
* meeting new California friends and eating at Grimaldi's in Brooklyn
= desserts; courses in a meal; main courses; appetizers; breads; meats; different parts of relationships
= food is the one thing that everyone has in common
= food gives you a certain high (Jenny)
= you are what you eat (Meagan)
= whether or not you shared the food
= sit down restaurant with old friends or fast food with the "usual" people in life

- Journal filled with quotes --> pick out some of my favorite quotes; why did I put it in there? what is its importance?

Monday, November 10, 2008

Blog #15 - Important Places

As I have mentioned in class a few times, I've moved a total of 12 times during my 22 years here on earth. My dad is a minister for our Church and he is sent to various parts of the world to administer brethren there and disseminate the gospel of our faith. We've lived in various islands in Hawaii when I was younger. We then moved to the "mainland" and resided in California, Texas, Illinois, New Jersey, and now New York. This assignment is nearly impossible for me to complete at the moment because of school...unless someone wants to donate to the Camille Fund so that I can take a vacation to any one of these place! Just kidding...

Anyways, I guess one place that is of utmost importance to me is church/chapel. Since my life pretty much revolves around my religion, the one place that has consistantly been a key setting is the chapel. I find peace whenever I go in there knowing that I can lay all my cares on God, praying that He'll help me out with whatever problems that come along the way. I can't really describe what it looks like because they're all different, but regardless of that, the chapel is my sanctuary.

Wednesday, November 5, 2008

Blog #14 - Preparing for Essay #3

I have a lot of ideas of what I want to write about for Essay #3. Here are some of them. Let me know what you think.

1) After watching history being made last night, I have this overwhelming feeling of patriotism inside of me. I woke up this morning and this idea popped inside my head! I kind of want to write about something that deals with the USA. I'm leaning more towards the significance of colors, in particular the colors of red, white, and blue. Just like "Laundry" wherein the author wrote about her personal experiences, then jumping to how it has evolved over history and how people have used it, I want to do research on how the colors got associated with the two major parties in the US (democrat & republican) and I guess how those colors relate to my life (red -- blood and how I don't like blood, blue -- cold, being frozen, whatever!) I just think it would be cool doing research and actually finding out what these colors mean and why they are so significant, especially now.

2) Keys! Keys are important because they open locked doors, or can be a symbol for the future --> keys to success, whatever. Keys are significant to all of us because without it, we can't open doors and enter a new world.

3) Boxes! I've moved around a total of 12 times during my life. I've always been surrounded by boxes because my life pretty much goes into a box every 2-3 years. I don't know what to write about here, but I have an idea...can't really put it all down right now since you're all waiting to read this, so post any comments, please!! It'll surely help me move along.

Thanks everyone!!

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I appreciate everyone's comments and I think I'm going to write about boxes. I'll save the other two ideas for essay #4. After living in our current house for more than 2 years, we actually still have a whole room dedicated to unopened boxes. My parents know that we don't need these things anymore, yet we still haven't discarded any of them. Here's what' I'm planning on including in my essay. It's a really MESSY list but I hope by getting it all down, it'll help me along the way.

- My parents coming to America when I was a year old and my sister only 3 months old. They brought with them x amount of boxes from the Philippines when we moved to Hawaii. They always tell us stories of how hard it was lugging around boxes from here to there with two kids attached at the hip. I guess I'll start with these few boxes...what's inside and it's importance. Do my parents still have any of these things that they first brought with them to America? Hmm...I guess we'll see.

- I can write about the move from Hawaii to California...the first move to the "mainland". I was 7 years old and that was the first time I realized that I was going to start a new life, leaving my old friend and everything that I grew up knowing behind. The only things that were of importance to me at that age were my stuffed animals. Where are they now?? I guess we'll see.

- Living in Houston and waiting to move to Canada. We didn't move to Canada but we were supposed to. We put everything in boxes and it stayed there for a good 4 months. Why? I don't know.

- I can also talk about getting used to moving and how my family became expert "packers".

- Labeling boxes (clothes, shoes, school files, etc.) What is it's significance? Which one do I open up first?

- Moving from Detroit to Elizabeth, NJ. Being so eager to unpack everything because our house was big.

- Move from NJ to LIC, NY = from a big house to a "tiny" one. Why do we still have so many boxes? Why haven't we opened them yet?

** possible focus: (thanks Lauren) my relationship to boxes; fear of unpacking boxes in fear that I might move again; starting over, etc.

Sunday, November 2, 2008

Blog #13 - Describe Someone You Know

For Blog 13: describe the character of someone you know in terms of clothing. Write into the details. Only describe what you can see and use your description to tell as much as you can about who this person is. We will read these descriptions in class and see how much your description lets us know about vocation, age, gender, interests, and so on.
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Here's blog #2 that I would like to skip. Sorry! I'm trying to catch up with my other classes, trying to finishing other assignments, so...there's no entry.